This is an anonymous request from a subscriber. My teacher wrote: 16/30 marks. The reason why you haven’t done well is you haven’t engaged with the extract and you have not made the extract the focus of your essay. You MUST ANSWER the question and YOU MUST focus your answer on the extract. Zoom in on words and use context.
Mr S thanks for sharing. Could you possibly share a few points you would add/ make regarding the relationship that would be fitting for / model a grade 9 level answer?
Mr S thanks for sharing. Could you possibly share a few points you would add/ make regarding the relationship that would be fitting for / model a grade 9 level answer?
I find myself constantly battling against this sort of teaching as a tutor. It’s not the teachers’ fault as you say Dominic.