I’m on holiday till Tuesday, and unable to use my laptop, so editing is difficult.
But, this also allows for an interesting experiment for paid subscribers. Write down 2-3 things that you think make that paragraph excellent.
My prediction is that this will make it much easier for you to write your own essay.
I will then publish this essay again with my ob…
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